Tuesday, July 19, 2016

Writing with Sharon Watson - The Power in Your Hands 2nd Edition {TOS REVIEW}

Writing with Sharon Watson Review

Jam has added a new High School Writing Program to our summer schedule from Writing with Sharon Watson. Jam has been working through The Power in Your Hands:Writing Nonfiction in High School, 2nd Edition.

Summer has been a great time to focus on some of the subjects that are sometimes neglected during the regular busy school year. Jam has worked through a literature course (another Sharon Watson one) during our last school year and so we decided this review was the perfect time to focus a little on non-fiction writing. The curriculum is designed for grades 9-12 and since Jam has just finished 9th grade we decided to get a head start on his 10th grade English.

Jam is very self motivated and I give him his schedules in weekly blocks. This way he can plan his time and work more or less on certain days depending on his schedule. This program has been perfect for this schedule. Jam has been able to work completely at his own pace each week and is doing great at working on prioritizing. Since his school work schedule is lighter it's been easy to balance his summer chores, summer league swimming, Eagle Scout projects and other activities with his school work.

We received the e-book version of this program. The student book alone is 400+ pages so Jam luckily has his own laptop. I didn't print off the whole book. He worked from the online version using a notebook and just printed the necessary pages as he went.
Writing with Sharon Watson Review

This curriculum is broken down into seven sections. Each one teaching skills that build on each other.

Part One - Before You Write

This section includes chapter one and two. It really helps the student focus on preparation. Right at the beginning of chapter one there is a quote that sums Jam up perfectly;

In fact as soon as Jam saw it he laughed and said 'That is SO me!'.

Part Two - Persuasion

This section covers chapters three to eight. I'm not going to cover all the details found in these chapters the title of the section explains the types of writing instruction covered.

Part Three - Proofreading

This section covers two chapters and is full to the brim of interesting and well written information to help proof-read essays.

Part Four - Expositions

This section covers chapters eleven through nineteen. This covers so much more material it's quite amazing. The topics covered range from writing letters and emails, compare and contrast, dialog, and a 'Teeny-Tiny, Minuscule Punctuation Lesson' (which we found very handy!)

Part Five - Description

This section is just one chapter long but really covers a lot of material.

Part Six - Narration

This section is quite small but is still broken down into three chapters to make it easier to focus on the individual sections; Testimony, Interview Narrative, and Personal Narrative.

Part Seven - Reference

This section is amazing and I printed this section out for Jam to keep. It's chock full of helpful tips and useful things. No matter what you are writing there are tips in here to help.

When I asked Jam what he liked most about this program he said that the way it is written is great. He loves that it feels like Sharon Watson is talking directly to him. He can imagine her speaking and it includes fun facts and jokes. He really enjoyed the quotes at the beginning of chapter. Especially the first one I included earlier. Jam has been working on his Eagle Project which has included writing letters. He found this section of the course particularity helpful. I of course enjoyed having Sharon Watson backing me up in everything that I had previously taught him about writing letters when he had to send one last year to our State Representative for a merit badge.

Writing with Sharon Watson Review
We also received the Teacher's Guide. I didn't 'teach' Jam while he did his assignments. The student text is written in such a way that this isn't necessary. However, the essays and writing assignments Jam will complete and has completed need grading. The Teacher's Guide does an excellent job of explaining and helping me through the grading process. It tells you exactly what to look for and and how to proceed.

This has definitely won it's place into the 'We are going to complete this course' place on Jam's schedule!

Since other members of the crew were reviewing 21 Grading Grid for Popular High-School Essays and the Position Paper make sure you click on the link below to read more reviews.

Plus check out Sharon Watson on Facebook.

Writing with Sharon Watson Review

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  1. Thank you, Lisa, for your wonderful review of The Power in Your Hands, and thanks to Jam, too, for his comments. I hope he earned his merit badge. :-)

    I love it that you printed off the reference section for Jam. What a great idea!

    A big thanks for tackling this during the summer months. Have a lovely school year together!

  2. Thanks for your kind comments - we are really enjoying it! Yes he got his merit badge. In fact he is just waiting on the paperwork and board of review for his Eagle!!! No more merit badges until Captain gets older.

  3. Congratulations to him! And to you!


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